that would help it stand out more as a model! i would also apply spas and toons to the rest of the parts and try and spruce up the rest of the textures to make them seem more original, rather than a copy-paste tda OC with default textures. In the end, the only things that can really save this model would be if you fixed the textures, the display panel, give the model a major spring cleaning, and/or find better parts. I would also HIGHLY recommend adding english facials !! it makes everything so much easier! … and the ears aren’t completely fitted to the head, which is extremely distracting. There’s also a rigging issue with the shorts that should probably be fixed. simply googling ‘mmd piercing’ would give you several options to choose from. I’m also unsure if those two lines on her lips are supposed to be stitches or piercings either way, make them as actual objects instead of just a drawn texture. there’s a tutorial on how to add scars, markings, etc to objects you can use to have the red marks on her face there without having to split the face texture. i doubt that was the look you were probably going for, so i would try and keep the face all one texture instead of splitting it in two. The textures on the face look very rushed, as well as the eyeshadow being asymmetrical. same thing with the eyelashes it doesnt look natural. try making the eyebrows a dark blonde or a brown. also, black eyebrows do not match with blonde hair. i don’t know if this is something you’d want to keep in mind, but since you’re trying to make a model of a utau, i’d recommend not basing her appearance off of an already preexisting character. Not to mention, the head, hair, and other features look a lot like the lenka tda models that are already out there.

it looks much neater and less blocky and unnatural. Instead of splitting a material to make a different hair color, i would rather recommend editing the texture itself. there are plenty of tutorials on deviantart to learn how to clean your models, and there are even checklists available to make sure you have exactly what you need done before releasing a model for public use. )įirstly, i want to say that before releasing any mmd model or edit, please please please PLEASE clean it up first!! from what i can see here, there are extra, unused bones, physics everywhere, and the display panel is an absolute mess. ( i will be analyzing the ‘default’ model in this model pack that you’ve provided. Could you please critique this model? I kinda updated her, so ummm, I don’t know what to say…

Mmd tda base model